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Reading Response 6

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I think this video is awesome. As far as packaging goes these two companies could not be any different. The video was a great way to show criticism towards the designs of their packages. Showing the progression as they added different elements to the package was better emphasized through the video. Information overload compromises a piece of writing because it very distracting. When there is too much information on a package it can distract from the information that is actually important. Looking at the package that they created, you can hardly tell what the product actually.

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Learning Module 6

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I evaluated the solution and what we learned section of my case study. Sometimes I tend to use run on sentences so while revising I fixed some sentences to be more precise and exact. Overall the revision has made it easier to read, and less confusing.

Some examples:
Twelve years later, the campaign is still in full swing
The campaign is still in full swing twelve years later.

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Case Study Draft

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I think our draft explains the history of the campaign very well. I think we could be a little more descriptive throughout because some readers may not have previous knowledge of the case. Overall I think the videos and pictures help to explain it better though.

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Applying the Paramedic Method

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Documentation:

Sentence 1:While it is not completely necessary to completely follow the rule of thirds for a profile picture, moving the subject to one side slightly will help make the picture more visually appealing.

After:While it is not necessary to be completely accurate, moving the subject to one side slightly will help make the picture more visually appealing.

Sentient 2. After cropping, create a duplicate of this layer on the right hand side of the screen so that it can be further edited without losing the original.

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Reading Response 4

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I think it is important that authors and content creators protect their intellectual property to keep others from taking credit for things that are not theirs. As technology advances it becomes easier and easier to acquire and “steal” other peoples work. As mentioned in the video, it also goes back to the money aspect as well. Other people should not be able to make money on other peoples work, and also people shouldn’t lose money from their work because of people ignoring copyrights.

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