Learning Module 5

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About Me Sentence Revisions

Before: I am a member of Sigma Alpha at Clemson University, which is a professional sorority whose goal is to promote women in agriculture.
After: At Clemson University I am a member of Sigma Alpha, a professional agricultural sorority.

Before: At the Anne Springs Close Greenway Horse Barn, I taught summer camps and private lessons, and also provided maintenance and upkeep for the horses.
After: I taught summer camps and private lessons at the Anne Springs Close Greenway Horse Barn. Among my other responsibilities were providing maintenance for the barn and upkeep for the horses.

Documentation Revisions

Before: You can chat either privately by using the “start chat with” button, or publicly using the chat screen in the middle of the Connect home screen.
After: There are two options for chatting in Adobe Connect. The first option is to chat privately using the “start chat with” button. The second option is to chat publicly using the chat screen in the middle of the home screen.

Before: You are given a sentence to speak into your microphone and record to submit to the meeting director.
After: You will be given a sentence to speak into your microphone. This sentence is recorded and submitted to the meeting director.

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