About Me Story
My "About Me Story" now sounds more precise and professional. It gets to the point quick and therefore doesn't last too long.
Before: I am a rising senior at Clemson University studying Mechanical Engineering. I plan to graduate in May of 2017.
After: Clemson University Mechanical Engineering student graduating in May of 2017.
Before: During my time at Clemson, I have had the opportunity to not only learn theory in my courses as an Undergraduate but also apply and practice these concepts in unique experiences.
After: While pursuing my undergraduate at Clemson, I have been able to apply the theory and concepts practiced in the classroom in unique experiences.
Before: PDF files, or Portable Document Files, were created by Adobe as a way to share documents of all kinds across different platforms.
After: Adobe created PDF files, or Portable Document Files, to share various documents across multiple platforms.
Before: We will cover each section of tools and how to use one important tool from each group.
After: We will cover each section of tools and an important tool from each group.