Learning Module 5

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About Me Story

My "About Me Story" now sounds more precise and professional. It gets to the point quick and therefore doesn't last too long.

Before: I am a rising senior at Clemson University studying Mechanical Engineering. I plan to graduate in May of 2017.

After: Clemson University Mechanical Engineering student graduating in May of 2017.

Before: During my time at Clemson, I have had the opportunity to not only learn theory in my courses as an Undergraduate but also apply and practice these concepts in unique experiences.

After: While pursuing my undergraduate at Clemson, I have been able to apply the theory and concepts practiced in the classroom in unique experiences.

Documentation Project

Before: PDF files, or Portable Document Files, were created by Adobe as a way to share documents of all kinds across different platforms.

After: Adobe created PDF files, or Portable Document Files, to share various documents across multiple platforms.

Before: We will cover each section of tools and how to use one important tool from each group.

After: We will cover each section of tools and an important tool from each group.

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