Using the paramedic method, I revised some of my sentences so that they varied between short and long. I also revised some of the verbs. Here are some examples:
Here is how the paramedic method improved my About Me:
I am currently an intern at Clemson Online, where I do preliminary research for initiatives, create media using Adobe software, and participated in various other marketing activities.
I am currently an intern at Clemson Online, where I conduct preliminary research for initiatives, create media using Adobe software, and market online education.
I am also a member of Clemson Engineers for Developing Countries, an organization committed to providing assistance to underdeveloped countries.
I am also a member of a group on campus called Clemson Engineers for Developing Countries (CEDC). With CEDC, I do research to test the viability of projects to improve lives in Cange, Haiti.
In my experience, buiding resumes in Microsoft Word is incredibly frustrating and time-consuming.
Resume design in Microsoft Word can be frustrating and time-consuming.
InDesign is so much easier to customize to your needs once you get past that initial learning curve.
InDesign is so much easier to customize, after learning how to use the software.