Before: I'm a highly motivated, socially aware individual who excels in establishing and maintaining relationships.
After: Highly motivated, socially perceptive young professional who excels in establishing and maintaining relationships with key clients.
Before: I can effectively communicate corporate branding through facebook, instagram, and twitter, as well as my own personal networking.
After: Effectively communicates corporate brand through social media and personal networking.
The paramedic method allowed me to streamline my summary/about me section on linkedin. I used the more active style, and trimmed down a lot of unnecessary wording that slowed the reader and lost interest.